Ill ideas

Welp, for all the sudden, I started to feel quite sick. And sometimes, my sickness gives a birth to good, but not less sick ideas.


Here’s one of those. Here we go.

The idea of story is not clear yet. Beggining starts around a lovely couple. They enjoy their time together, taking a walk on the street together, at the evening after hard work day. Yet it’s getting a bit too late, and even if they usually going the same way on the streets, unfortunately they getting unwanted meeting with street bullies. Attempt to just avoid them fails – they don’t want money or something else. They want a girl.

Her boyfriend simly can’t allow that. He don’t ask those for anything, but simply covers the girl, staying between her and them. And getting “punished” for that, ending up laying on the street, with the whole body covered by pain. Yet as they try to get to the girl again, over the lying body of her boyfriend, he stands up and covers her again, fighting with pain, not even thinking to give up. Even if he can’t be anything else but a meat shield.

And here things hurts much more. Bully leader gets his knive and, without much of thinking, stabs the boy. Girl is just too scared to make even a single sound, to scream or run away – she’s shocked, and that shock just don’t want to let her go, holding her and making her whole body to shiver. Few stabs in the belly, few in the chest – serious wounds, which is hard to survive. The boy goes down again, bleeding and hardly able to do anything.

But yet it’s not ended. Even then bullies pretty much sure they got rid of only line between them and their target, the boy stands up again. Covered in blood and heavily bleeding, he standed straight in front of the guys. Their leader stabbed him again, but that did pretty much nothing. The boy just took the edge of the knive deeper in his body, while his hand reached the neck of the bully and holded it. And then he said just one word.


His girlfriend got it as command for her. All the fear in her now pushed her, and she ran away. Part of the group tried to follow her, but others now been watching not so pleasant picture – the boy took the knive out of his body and stabbed their leader in the neck several times, breaking it. And their leader fall, rather soon, choking in his own blood. The boy just turned to them – his face been covered in blood, eyes turned blood-red. Grotesque emotion on his face been none less scary – pain and madness, all together. And he moved to those who left, as they, scared, tried to protect themselves.

Others still been running after the girl, quite close to reach her. They had no idea on what’s happening behind, as they’re been thinking only about their reward if they’ll catch her. But for all the sudden, with screams of pain, one of them just fall on the ground. There’s been a knive in his leg, and quite deep in it, making it impossible to move.

– Got you, bitch!

With screams and cries, girl stopped, as her head been pushed back by force. One of guys reached her and holded her hair, painfully pushing her back. But that not been for too long – now the bully screamed, as the knive now stuck in his hand. But next knive got right into his head. His hands instantly stopped to hold the girl, and she looked behind her. Her boyfriend been standing at another end of the street, still bleeding, yet he’s been taking the knive out of the leg of one of bullies.

– Run! Don’t stop and just run!

She’s been unable to understand what happens. Yet she done as he said. There’s still been one more bully, as the one who’s been injured in the leg, now also been dead. But he’s been scared now. He’s not been interested in trying to catch the girl. Just ran away from that walking nightmare his friends just found…


Next day the whole street goes locked by police, as they’re been looking after the mass murder. 6 dead bodies, all died out of fatal injuries. Not too far from each other, and all of them somehow been followed by police, by that reason or another. And police detective supposed to understand – why they got killed, who did that and how it happened. And so far, there’s been only 1 person who maybe would be able to tell the whole story – one guy that layed not too far from the place of the blood shed. Heavily injured, with high loss of blood, yet alive. But because of all that, for now he’s been in koma, so asking him for anything would be quite a problem, making understanding of the situation much harder, unless there’s someone else to tell the story…


And here it ends for now. Maybe I’ll eventually make it into a normal story, with names and some sort of central idea around it. The boy went berserk, but maybe it’s something planned? Maybe it’s been some sort of experiment? Maybe he have some unique ability, and now geverment will be interested in using him for own experiments? What happened to his girlfriend, how is she right now and what role is prepared for her in this story?


I have no idea really. Stay tuned. Or not, as it might not go even a bit futher than simple scrap.





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